You should finish your FINAL draft by the end of today's class. PLEASE PRINT AND PLACE IN YOUR FOLDER.
*If you finish after class is over and plan on emailing it to me, staple a email form to the front of the folder and when it will be sent. Remember, if it is past 4/1 it will be considered late and will lose 10 points.
TODAY will be spent--
*Completing the peer/self-editing sheet (remember, peer-editing is extra-credit, self-editing is part of the rubric grade)
*Making edits and completing the final draft (a signature is required for rough draft credit)
*Please print out both the Works Cited and research paper and place them in your folder if possible.
THE ENTIRE FOLDER NEEDS TO BE TURNED IN BY MONDAY 4/1 at 11: 59 pm FOR FULL-CREDIT!
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Some last minute notes on writing the body paragraphs (some examples on putting in the sources):
Option #1 (author's name and title in the sentence): According to Jared Diamond the author of Guns, Germs and Steel: The Fate of Human Societies, "We all know that history has proceeded very differently..." (13).
Option #2 (author's name in the sentence): Jared Diamond explains to us that, "history has proceeded very differently..." (13).
Option #3 (paraphrase no name in the sentence): According to this source, history has proceeded at different rates on different continents (Diamond 13).
Option #4 (no name in sentence/or title): Because, "...history has proceeded very differently..." there are many differences throughout the globe (Diamond 13).
Option 5# (no author/title in the sentence): According to The Global Monitoring Report," Education for all cannot be achieved without improving quality" (17).
Option #6 (no author/no title in the sentence): The information presented in this source tells us that, " Education for all cannot be achieved without improving quality" ("Education for All" 17).
Option #7 (two authors/author in the sentence): Best and Marcus argue that one should read a text for what it says on its surface, rather than looking for some hidden meaning (9).
Option #8 (two authors/names not in the sentence): The authors claim that surface reading looks at what is “evident, perceptible, apprehensible in texts” (Best and Marcus 9).
Option #9 (more than two authors): According to the article, "The Economic Impacts of Broadband" we learn that, "Broadband’s economic significance can be put into context by referring to similar changes in other areas of infrastructure, such as road, rail, and electricity" ( Qiang et al. 1).
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Here is an additional source with help/explanations on in-text citations if you need it: Click here
Don't forget transitions!!!
Use your note sheet on signal words!!
Friday, March 29, 2019
Thursday, March 28, 2019
Works Cited Page
A Works Cited Page. A Works Cited page is a listing of the sources in ALPHABETICAL ORDER you CITED in your paper--NOT A BIBLIOGRAPHY. At this point you should make one for every source sheet using the format below.
***Note: if you decide not to use a source you can take it off later, or add one on if needed.***
Works Cited general example: click here
CLICK HERE FOR A DOWNLOADABLE COPY: CLICK HERE
Below are the sources we used. They must be done in this SPECIFIC WAY in order to be correct.This must be the last page of your research paper in order for it not to be considered plagiarism!
***Note: if you decide not to use a source you can take it off later, or add one on if needed.***
Works Cited general example: click here
CLICK HERE FOR A DOWNLOADABLE COPY: CLICK HERE
Below are the sources we used. They must be done in this SPECIFIC WAY in order to be correct.This must be the last page of your research paper in order for it not to be considered plagiarism!
Wednesday, March 27, 2019
Please copy the following notes in red leaving blanks (I'd suggest skipping a line) and put it in your folder
Extra Credit: 5 points
1. The hardest part about the research paper was __________________.
2. The easiest thing about the research paper was _________________.
3. I learned how to ___________________________( or better) while doing this project.
4. I still feel I have trouble with ________________________________.
5. If I had a guess, my grade on the paper would be ________________. This is because _______________________.
6. I feel (confident/not confident) that I can write a college paper at this point. (choose 1)
-------------------------------------------Today's Agenda (after the above notes)--------------------------
1. STAY FOCUSED!! You only have today and tomorrow in class to complete the following:
*Finish anything you did not finish yet (source sheets, Works Cited, counterclaim, outline)
YOU SHOULD NOT BEGIN DRAFTING UNTIL YOU HAVE FINISHED YOUR OUTLINE and I have checked it!
Follow the outline as you write--it is a map to end up in the right place!!
2. Please make sure I (or a co-teacher) check your work and sign your sheet giving you credit for a rough draft.
*I will need to see a version of a rough draft in sign it in order for you to get credit. This should be completed before the Peer/Self editing sheet. A printed rough draft works too if you want handwritten comments by me.
3. Complete the self-editing sheet and place it in the folder--THIS IS MANDATORY IF YOU WANT THE POINTS
4. Complete the peer-editing sheet for 5 points EXTRA-CREDIT (make sure your editor signs their name indicating that they read your draft and gave you comments)
***therefore, there is a possibility of 10 extra-credit points**********************
5. Make sure you:
*Check the components of your assignment and portfolio
*Are keeping your portfolio organized and intact
*Print out any sheets you need printed
Sample of a counterclaim paragraph and a conclusion (this is the same paper from yesterday's intro and body 1):
1. The hardest part about the research paper was __________________.
2. The easiest thing about the research paper was _________________.
3. I learned how to ___________________________( or better) while doing this project.
4. I still feel I have trouble with ________________________________.
5. If I had a guess, my grade on the paper would be ________________. This is because _______________________.
6. I feel (confident/not confident) that I can write a college paper at this point. (choose 1)
-------------------------------------------Today's Agenda (after the above notes)--------------------------
1. STAY FOCUSED!! You only have today and tomorrow in class to complete the following:
*Finish anything you did not finish yet (source sheets, Works Cited, counterclaim, outline)
YOU SHOULD NOT BEGIN DRAFTING UNTIL YOU HAVE FINISHED YOUR OUTLINE and I have checked it!
Follow the outline as you write--it is a map to end up in the right place!!
2. Please make sure I (or a co-teacher) check your work and sign your sheet giving you credit for a rough draft.
*I will need to see a version of a rough draft in sign it in order for you to get credit. This should be completed before the Peer/Self editing sheet. A printed rough draft works too if you want handwritten comments by me.
3. Complete the self-editing sheet and place it in the folder--THIS IS MANDATORY IF YOU WANT THE POINTS
4. Complete the peer-editing sheet for 5 points EXTRA-CREDIT (make sure your editor signs their name indicating that they read your draft and gave you comments)
***therefore, there is a possibility of 10 extra-credit points**********************
5. Make sure you:
*Check the components of your assignment and portfolio
*Are keeping your portfolio organized and intact
*Print out any sheets you need printed
Sample of a counterclaim paragraph and a conclusion (this is the same paper from yesterday's intro and body 1):
Tuesday, March 26, 2019
Today's Goal: Finish your outline and begin drafting your paper. But first, let's go over the different types of in-text citations: (Citation information from the OWL at Purdue and Lane Community Library page)
Notes:
*Please make note of the fact that paraphrased information must also be cited.
*If there is no author, use the title in place of the author's name.
*It is best to vary the styles that you use in your paper; it will make your writing look more advanced and less formulaic.
Below is a sample MLA front page from the beginning of class if you need it:
*Also, I included a link to another YouTube video for those of you who enjoyed yesterday's that will walk you step-by-step through the paper: click here to watch
Here is the heading you can use:Friday, March 22, 2019
Today's objectives: Go through writing the research paper step-by-step--
CLICK HERE TO SEE THE OUTLINE GIVEN ON DAY 1 FOR HELP!!!!!!---PAGES 7-9 WALK YOU THROUGH IT STEP-BY-STEP!!!
Part 1: How to write the intro
Click here for a helpful video on how to write your intro
Part 2: How to write body paragraphs
Click her for a helpful video on how to write body paragraphs
Here is a sample of an introduction and body 1 from a student's paper:

HERE ARE SOME HINTS ON INSERTING YOUR QUOTES:
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Some last minute notes on writing the body paragraphs (some examples on putting in the sources):
Option #1 (author's name and title in the sentence): According to Jared Diamond the author of Guns, Germs and Steel: The Fate of Human Societies, "We all know that history has proceeded very differently..." (13).
Option #2 (author's name in the sentence): Jared Diamond explains to us that, "history has proceeded very differently..." (13).
Option #3 (paraphrase no name in the sentence): According to this source, history has proceeded at different rates on different continents (Diamond 13).
Option #4 (no name in sentence/or title): Because, "...history has proceeded very differently..." there are many differences throughout the globe (Diamond 13).
Option 5# (no author/title in the sentence): According to The Global Monitoring Report," Education for all cannot be achieved without improving quality" (17).
Option #6 (no author/no title in the sentence): The information presented in this source tells us that, " Education for all cannot be achieved without improving quality" ("Education for All" 17).
Option #7 (two authors/author in the sentence): Best and Marcus argue that one should read a text for what it says on its surface, rather than looking for some hidden meaning (9).
Option #8 (two authors/names not in the sentence): The authors claim that surface reading looks at what is “evident, perceptible, apprehensible in texts” (Best and Marcus 9).
Option #9 (more than two authors): According to the article, "The Economic Impacts of Broadband" we learn that, "Broadband’s economic significance can be put into context by referring to similar changes in other areas of infrastructure, such as road, rail, and electricity" ( Qiang et al. 1).
Part 3: Writing the counter-claim
Watch here where most of this is all explained.
Here is what a counter-claim paragraph might sound like:
On the other hand, it has been argued that ________________________________ (counterclaim).
This point of view seems to make sense because _____________________(evidence/reasoning that supports the counter-claim)
However, ________________________________________(rebuttal--why is this weak? Give support through evidence!!!)
Therefore, ________________________________________(sum up why your claim is better/makes more sense)
Part 4: How to write the conclusion
Click her for a helpful video on how to write a conclusion
Part 1: How to write the intro
Click here for a helpful video on how to write your intro
Part 2: How to write body paragraphs
Click her for a helpful video on how to write body paragraphs
Here is a sample of an introduction and body 1 from a student's paper:
HERE ARE SOME HINTS ON INSERTING YOUR QUOTES:
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Some last minute notes on writing the body paragraphs (some examples on putting in the sources):
Option #1 (author's name and title in the sentence): According to Jared Diamond the author of Guns, Germs and Steel: The Fate of Human Societies, "We all know that history has proceeded very differently..." (13).
Option #2 (author's name in the sentence): Jared Diamond explains to us that, "history has proceeded very differently..." (13).
Option #3 (paraphrase no name in the sentence): According to this source, history has proceeded at different rates on different continents (Diamond 13).
Option #4 (no name in sentence/or title): Because, "...history has proceeded very differently..." there are many differences throughout the globe (Diamond 13).
Option 5# (no author/title in the sentence): According to The Global Monitoring Report," Education for all cannot be achieved without improving quality" (17).
Option #6 (no author/no title in the sentence): The information presented in this source tells us that, " Education for all cannot be achieved without improving quality" ("Education for All" 17).
Option #7 (two authors/author in the sentence): Best and Marcus argue that one should read a text for what it says on its surface, rather than looking for some hidden meaning (9).
Option #8 (two authors/names not in the sentence): The authors claim that surface reading looks at what is “evident, perceptible, apprehensible in texts” (Best and Marcus 9).
Option #9 (more than two authors): According to the article, "The Economic Impacts of Broadband" we learn that, "Broadband’s economic significance can be put into context by referring to similar changes in other areas of infrastructure, such as road, rail, and electricity" ( Qiang et al. 1).
Watch here where most of this is all explained.
Here is what a counter-claim paragraph might sound like:
On the other hand, it has been argued that ________________________________ (counterclaim).
This point of view seems to make sense because _____________________(evidence/reasoning that supports the counter-claim)
However, ________________________________________(rebuttal--why is this weak? Give support through evidence!!!)
Therefore, ________________________________________(sum up why your claim is better/makes more sense)
Part 4: How to write the conclusion
Click her for a helpful video on how to write a conclusion
Thursday, March 21, 2019
Wednesday, March 20, 2019
Taking Research Notes: Day 2
Here is an editable source note sheet for your use: Click here
*We will have today and tomorrow to finish our research notes (you should have a minimum of 4 additional sources done at the end of class tomorrow)
*Remember to try to use the articles you find will suit you best (what info are you lacking?)
*Use the CTRL+F function to "find" key words you are looking for in longer documents
*We will have today and tomorrow to finish our research notes (you should have a minimum of 4 additional sources done at the end of class tomorrow)
*Remember to try to use the articles you find will suit you best (what info are you lacking?)
*Use the CTRL+F function to "find" key words you are looking for in longer documents
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