Wednesday, May 25, 2016

"Past Present" Day 2: Compare/Contrast and Rhetorical Devices

Today we will:
 Read chunk #2 of "Past Present" by Jimmy Santiago Baca (Page 5, Paragraph 14-Page 9, Paragraph 28) together as a class.

**Remember, we want to identify and analyze his writing strategies for ideas we can use for our own compare/contrast narratives that we will begin brainstorming for tomorrow.**

After we complete the reading, you and your partner will (both partners need to write out the answers in their essay packets for credit (35 pts.):
Answer the following questions using the RACE strategy (restate/answer/cite/explain):

Analyzing Meaning #1-3 and Discovering Rhetorical Strategies #1-4.

**Please be prepared to share your answers with the class for discussion.**

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Tuesday, May 24, 2016

Notes from Tuesday 5/24:

Title: "Past Present"
Author: Jimmy Santiago Baca
Genre: personal narrative/ comparison/contrast

Speaker (who is speaking--what do we know about him/her?)—
author—Baca; was in prison out 12 years.  Now a writer/making a movie/father/husband

Occasion (time and place of the writing? what prompted the writing?)--
he went back to his former prison to make a movie and feels himself reminiscing about his former life

Audience (who is he speaking to? may be more than 1)--

former inmates, current inmates, people who have never been in prison, people who have had similar experiences, himself

Purpose (what does the speaker want each audience to think or do?)--


to tell others what it was like, understand his own transformation

Subject (the basic topic of the piece?)—the author a former prison inmate goes back to his former jail and compares/contrasts his current and former self


Tone—depressed, angry, disappointed, nostalgic

"Past Present" by Jimmy Santiago Baca

Introduction: This year we have both read (ie. The Autobiography of Malcolm X, etc.) and written (college essay, RITS assignment, etc.) personal narrative and compare/contrast essays. We will need to use the skills we learned this year in order to finish our last assignment.

Purpose: In preparation for writing a senior farewell narrative, we are going to read "Past Present" by Jimmy Santiago Baca. In this personal narrative, the author compares/contrasts his experience both as a prisoner in San Quentin, and his return as an author/filmmaker.

Culminating Assignment: We will analyze this work and the author's methods of writing (SOAPSTONE/COMPARE/CONTRAST, RHETORICAL DEVICES, ETC.) in order to help craft our own personal narrative essay that compares/contrasts our first/last day at McKinley High School.

Please copy the following information on the front page of an essay booklet:

Title: "Past Present"
Author: Jimmy Santiago Baca
Genre: personal narrative/ comparison/contrast

Speaker (who is speaking--what do we know about him/her?)--



Occasion (time and place of the writing? what prompted the writing?)--


Audience (who is he speaking to? may be more than 1)--



Purpose (what does the speaker want each audience to think or do?)--



Subject (the basic topic of the piece?)--



Tone (what is the author's attitude towards the topic?)--

Friday, May 20, 2016

To be passing at the 5-week you must...Taking a break from the "justice" unit, we will get back to it on Monday-Thursday of next week

1. Turned in your RITS packet (at least a portion of it)
2. Taken the RITS test
3. Turned in your RITS essay (Part A and Part B)  (SEE LAST FRIDAY'S POST FOR HELP)

Other 5 week assignments include:
4. Quick Write #4
5. Quick Write #5
6. RITS quiz 4 (2.2)
7. Close-reading worksheet RITS
8. various in-class assignments (that cannot be made up)

PLEASE RETURN ANY BOOKS THAT YOU HAVE BORROWED, AS THE OFFICE WILL BE ASKING FOR A LIST OF NAMES OF PEOPLE WHO HAVE BOOKS OUT. THIS INCLUDES THE AUTOBIOGRAPHY OF MALCOLM X.

For extra-credit today (for the 5-week) you may (50 pts): 
1. The RITS packet of additional articles
a. annotate each article (underline, highlight, make notes)
b. Choose 3 of the sections (in bold) and explain in a paragraph or 2 how this information is critical to your understanding of the play A Raisin in the Sun
*c. You can also do the extra questions in the back of the packet

2. Castle Learning--log in and complete any available assignments (10 pts. each)
PLEASE TURN IN A SLIP LETTING ME KNOW WHICH ONES YOU FINISHED AND THE DATE FOR CREDIT. (let me know if you need to clear your password)


Remember our next week schedule is as follows:
Monday-133 (finish "Words" questions)
Tuesday-139
Wed--139
Thurs--139
Friday--OFF

Thursday, May 19, 2016

Thursday 5/19:Please be in class on-time to take your assessment!!

Today is your Post-Assessment for English IV--report to 139, unless you receive test accommodations. Mrs. Chambers will be proctoring your exam in 139.

Do your best, take your time. 

See you Friday in 139.

Wednesday, May 18, 2016

Room Schedule: Unless Anything changes this is our schedule until prom 6/3.....

Thursday 5/19--Room 139 for District Post-Assessment (unless you get extended time/test read, etc.)
Friday 5/20--Room 139
Monday 5/23--Room 133
Tuesday 5/24--Room 139
Wednesday 5/25--Room 139
Thursday 5/26--Room 139
Friday 5/27--OFF
Monday 5/30--OFF
Tuesday 5/31--Room 133
Wednesday 6/1--OFF
Thursday 6/2--Room 133
Friday 6/3--Room 139 (senior breakfast, etc.)