Examples of Direct (the author/narrator TELLS YOU) Characterization (pages 87-94):
Page 89: “A dark businessman-looking West Indian…”
Page 91/par 4: “Just about the complete opposite of Cadillac, was the young, smooth, independent-acting pimp”
Page 91: “The biggest, blackest, worst cop of them all in Harlem, was the West Indian Brisbane…”
Page 90: “They were feared and respected”
Page 91***: “He was shiny, bald-headed, built like a football” (Similar STEAL LOOKS)
Page 91: “Sammy who was from Kentucky, was a cool, collected expert in his business”
Page 92: "There was a big, fat pimp we called 'Dollarbill'” Page 93: "He was so cool"
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